Unwritten Soul


Just In A Little Time - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Beyond our mind
Secret of time whispering us
A beginning that we never know
Just in a little time
It came to me
To then tie with your heart
Created and taken my all
In a little time

Riding on a second to minutes
Just In a little time
It came and gone
Enough for lost moments
That we lived in short
Cruel to be erased
Just in a little time
Short lived time
I have for you

But then
Till this time taken
Taken away from us
Surrendering this life
Our remaining destined age
With the dust of blissful seconds
To glitter our smiles
In our short moments
Even it just a little time
This little time

Hurt
Endured by me someday
When this little times claim
From each ticking clock we have spent
Spending much in inventing our bond in last seconds
Though soon it will be distanced to be in years
Short lived moments that never return
It will keep recall on the same scar
Bruised me by all these memories
It does hurt, it does
I know
But i wont undo
For a short bliss with you
Our little time
And I will endure
I will endure

Just in Short time
I just want to be with you
I do

Beyond our mind
Secret of time whispering us
A beginning of to somewhere new
But when the ending come, i will endure


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A write about farewell with close friends...it does happened to us sometime where at certain road of our age we will choose to other way, but just feel the moment where it still there..._SOul

Comments about Just In A Little Time by Unwritten Soul

  • Christopher Tye (8/23/2016 5:19:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem, funny how life plays with us as we make and lose friends over time as we wonder what might have been. (Report) Reply

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  • Simone Inez Harriman (8/20/2016 3:17:00 PM)


    Beautiful, haunting poem rich in spirit. Thank you Soul. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:43:00 AM)

    Very kind words from you dear Simone...thank you and put smile on your face :)

  • (8/20/2016 12:50:00 PM)


    I love this one. It has beauty. I like to read it forwards and backwards - somehow it still has the same essence both ways. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:43:00 AM)

    That so sweet to do that, thanks for make me smile... :) :)

  • Lyn Paul (8/20/2016 9:40:00 AM)


    Very beautiful Soul. Having re read this after 2 years. We come to crossroads in our lives and have to make decisions for a much needed change. Just wishing sometimes we had done this much sooner.
    Thank You
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/20/2016 11:38:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading again lyn, me too sometimes I feel like I want to visit past again and make a huge change... What we can do now is to fight for better days ahead with those memories that still alive.. It will be forever in us

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/20/2016 9:34:00 AM)


    Congrats for the Beautiful poem of the day.
    Tides rise and fall, though it washes away the shore, still the memories remains though may be faded by the time as years go on. Beautiful write Soul from your pen. Loved the ink.
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:42:00 AM)

    Its nice to hear from you again Geeta. :) Thanks...you always nice to me

  • (8/20/2016 9:27:00 AM)


    Good work and very intelligent ideas (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:41:00 AM)

    Thanks Tom for your time

  • Clarence Prince (8/20/2016 7:45:00 AM)


    I will endure Yes, we need endurance to manage in this life!
    Thanks for sharing!
    (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:41:00 AM)

    As time will keep owning our strength, we have to, thanks for reading mine Clarence

  • The Princess (8/20/2016 6:20:00 AM)


    A beautiful write about loss and how time is so precious.. Even though time does pass, it could never erase the sweet memories that remain in our heart's forever! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:40:00 AM)

    Thank you Princess for your majesty words on my work.

  • Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (8/20/2016 5:53:00 AM)


    Time, she doth seduce
    All into her honey trap
    And none can refuse
    But fall helplessly into her lap......

    Great poem on time......
    (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/21/2016 3:40:00 AM)

    Time...Every beat it lives, time hold us wholly as if it was a soul to a space and matter... :) Thank you dear Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair for your time and beautiful comment :)

  • Judith Blatherwick (8/20/2016 1:52:00 AM)


    A gentle and wistful poem which spoke to me of the drifting of life. It made me think of people I have met but lost over time. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/20/2016 5:50:00 AM)

    Thank you Judith :) yes, i think everyone facing some time of losing great friends, the good thing is we always pray for them for good..and we all together be with them as long our mind keep them safe in heart, the chamber of feeling and closeness in our life :)

  • Kelly Kurt (8/20/2016 12:29:00 AM)


    Many a good friend has faded from my life over time. Such is the nature of life and time.
    Congrats on poem of the day, dear friend
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/20/2016 5:48:00 AM)

    Thank you Kelly, i have not noticing this until you telling me here :) Life is more beautiful with great friends even a nice true friend...but nothing in this world is eternal like memories...and the beauty things we carry with us whenever memories remind us about past... Thanks Kelly :)

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/21/2013 2:17:00 PM)


    A memorable break through the seed of love into the mud.....A sprouting soul nice (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:03:00 PM)


    parting as friends is a special way to part. memories will alwys be pleasant. (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/10/2013 7:09:00 AM)


    tender and nostalgic
    written with great emotion and feeling, a fluid write, portraying the feelings coming forth as the memories and the tears from drenched eyes.....

    a bit defeatist and lost against the tide of time, sometimes necessary and tangible sometimes just perceptions

    liked
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  • (5/29/2013 1:07:00 AM)


    Time and its hidden secrets..but the brave hearted will not stop but journeyed. Time together and time apart will be remenbered..memories valued. Beautiful write soul...excellent! (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2013 3:36:00 AM)


    Good use of repetition like the ticking of moments. I agree with Diane, it is better to endue and part as friends with good memories. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (5/17/2013 2:13:00 PM)


    Parting can be so sorrowful yet your poem shows the way. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (5/16/2013 7:38:00 AM)


    Wonderful to part friends and never burn your bridges though. A poem that shows us how farewells should always be made! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/15/2013 6:04:00 AM)


    Never say END. rest are fine. well versed with a beautiful composition. (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (5/14/2013 11:17:00 AM)


    But those who love
    But for those who really love
    Time stands still
    TIME, time, TIME, time
    Time stands still for those who really love

    Time by It's A Beautiful Day
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013


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