Unwritten Soul


Just In A Little Time - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Beyond our mind
Secret of time whispering us
A beginning that we never know
Just in a little time
It came to me
To then tie with your heart
Created and taken my all
In a little time

Riding on a second to minutes
Just In a little time
It came and gone
Enough for lost moments
That we lived in short
Cruel to be erased
Just in a little time
Short lived time
I have for you

But then
Till this time taken
Taken away from us
Surrendering this life
Our remaining destined age
With the dust of blissful seconds
To glitter our smiles
In our short moments
Even it just a little time
This little time

Hurt
Endured by me someday
When this little times claim
From each ticking clock we have spent
Spending much in inventing our bond in last seconds
Though soon it will be distanced to be in years
Short lived moments that never return
It will keep recall on the same scar
Bruised me by all these memories
It does hurt, it does
I know
But i wont undo
For a short bliss with you
Our little time
And I will endure
I will endure

Just in Short time
I just want to be with you
I do

Beyond our mind
Secret of time whispering us
A beginning of to somewhere new
But when the ending come, i will endure


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A write about farewell with close friends...it does happened to us sometime where at certain road of our age we will choose to other way, but just feel the moment where it still there..._SOul

Comments about Just In A Little Time by Unwritten Soul

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/21/2013 2:17:00 PM)

    A memorable break through the seed of love into the mud.....A sprouting soul nice (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:03:00 PM)

    parting as friends is a special way to part. memories will alwys be pleasant. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points Saadat Tahir (6/10/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    tender and nostalgic
    written with great emotion and feeling, a fluid write, portraying the feelings coming forth as the memories and the tears from drenched eyes.....

    a bit defeatist and lost against the tide of time, sometimes necessary and tangible sometimes just perceptions

    liked (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (5/29/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    Time and its hidden secrets..but the brave hearted will not stop but journeyed. Time together and time apart will be remenbered..memories valued. Beautiful write soul...excellent! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (5/20/2013 3:36:00 AM)

    Good use of repetition like the ticking of moments. I agree with Diane, it is better to endue and part as friends with good memories. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/17/2013 2:13:00 PM)

    Parting can be so sorrowful yet your poem shows the way. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (5/16/2013 7:38:00 AM)

    Wonderful to part friends and never burn your bridges though. A poem that shows us how farewells should always be made! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,089 Points Ramesh Rai (5/15/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    Never say END. rest are fine. well versed with a beautiful composition. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/14/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    But those who love
    But for those who really love
    Time stands still
    TIME, time, TIME, time
    Time stands still for those who really love

    Time by It's A Beautiful Day (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,964 Points Lyn Paul (5/14/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    What an amazing write, how a friendships so special can come to an end. A lots something last year and now know it was meant to be. Wow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/13/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    Endured by me someday
    When this little times claim
    From each ticking clock we have spent
    Spending much in inventing our bond in last seconds..

    so true, it happens in life, we haven't worth for our friends but when once we go away from them, their memories rendered our hearts, we want to go back to time, but in vain.such a forceful & emotive poem, again thumbs up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (5/12/2013 12:03:00 PM)

    please do not give any background to your poems, it takes away the interest of the reader, this reader at least, , plz allow the reader to draw his own conclusion, , , thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/12/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    A friendly spirit has been playing the door stops here. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,679 Points Valerie Dohren (5/12/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    Life often leads us on in different directions, and if we believe that we have a purpose to fulfill, then we need to follow our inner voice, even if it means leaving others behind. Another lovely write from you Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,769 Points Paul Brookes (5/12/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    Always in an end is a new beginning.The pathway of life is ever dividing ever branching some will travel the same path and keep us company some we lose to other roads. Your poem express these thoughts and sentiments so well Great Poem Thanks for sharing BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 476 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (5/12/2013 1:18:00 AM)

    Sometimes paths cross, and cross. Never staying for too long. As the sun sets, as the sunrises a moment or two lost. Commonalities do leave a pause. Temporary is this ferry. How much do we pay for our stay? How much does this simplicity cost us? A wound lurking, forever wanting, but knowing it can never permanent. To much time spent and we grow distant. The splitting of a heart. The dividing of souls. Good Poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,784 Points Wahab Abdul (5/12/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    wow, so lovely.. your poems are very forceful and full of efforts.. love it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013


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