mona martinez


Just Let Me Take Control - Poem by mona martinez

i know this is not the way,
but, it's the only way i feel i can win,
i can't deal with life,
there seem to be no way i can win,
would you agree,
everything messed up,
can't change what i want,
so all i say is let me go,
i don't want help,
that just mean more fo me to do,
life not easing up,
left with same stuff,
would you agree?
stress builds anger,
anger builds urges,
urges to take my life,
but, to some that not agreeable,
to the one thing i do want.

5-6-09


Comments about Just Let Me Take Control by mona martinez

  • Rookie Carol Gall (5/13/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    suicide is never an answer Mona i know keep writing get whatever it is out in poems (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/11/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    interesting piece..linked to a subtle theme[control/power] common to human instinct (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 30, 2009


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