Just Like Me Poem by daniel laurence

Just Like Me



im sitting here writing this crying
my soul inside me is dying
why oh why is it dying
i just felt sad all of a sudden

what is wrong with me i didnt feel this way earlier
this moring i was fine i felt the joy
but i sapose that now im a child without a toy
i dont know what brought it on tell me god why?

what is happening to me i feel alone
my heart isnt a organ it is a stone
it isnt envy or guilt or even love
no love that is a strange thing isnt it you can lose it so easy

but it wasnt any of those things at all
i just feel alone like i no longer have a home
each morning i feel like i slept on a floor
and each day i look up i am alone so i have to moan

im mean i think all of this is because of love
i mean have you ever been in love cause well i am
for you have you had a turtle dove
i bet for you it turned out good

then have our hearts broken
by the ones we love
so i wrote this because of my love this is a token
you can use this wisely and shape your life around it

and all though i told you your heart is still as cold as snow
for me you dont want to know
so i will search for someone else
someone else who is like my self

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ro'ya Abdulaal 18 March 2010

It's very sensuous and emotive, it's like you've put a piece of your soul in it, I loved the end rhymes and your words, well done Ro'ya

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