Just One Time! Poem by Ashley Reeves (male)(13)

Just One Time!

Rating: 4.0


the night lays cold watching the crystal blue lake,
slowly spreading from a world of power,
its colours blue glistening in that golden sun,
its gone for one last time.

a glimpse a glimmer an iridescent sunset,
powerful words, across a glad mans face,
eruption no more, peace my only thought,
for its gone for one last time.

a reflection so vague a pose so relaxed,
i have no fear i am the wonderer,
gloomy as i am terror is all i fear,
and its gone for one last time.

kissing the golden corn the sun breaks down,
now i see the light, its burning blaze,
peaking upon the mountains,
i am free for one last time.

it doth not matter, that breath to be withtaken,
the life to be ounce more,
i never will obtain it,
my road ends for now yet days go on ounce forever more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elenore Elizabeth 05 March 2008

wow ashley i couldnt write a poem like this when i was thirteen so imaginative

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Fred Babbin 18 February 2008

Not perfect, but very good for a 13 year old.

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