Just Tired Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Just Tired

Rating: 4.5


Simulation of a situation
As if controlled
Like we know people when we don't
And talk to them philially
So that something should be called
Interaction
Exchange
I am tired of it
Let's change

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 14 September 2013

I agree with you, there's very little sincere communication amongst humans. It always seems contrived, studied, hypocritical, hidden.....Openness does exist but encountered rarely, among best friends, perhaps? And now, with all this social electronic communication, personal self -expression may get worse or maybe better, if we know how to handle it. In any case, I liked your poem very much, everything that is expression and language touches me. I think you expressed beautifully that we should communicate more with our hearts and less with hypocrisy and protocol.Really, know people instead of pretending to know them.

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Saadat Tahir 11 September 2013

You reminded me of the well known adage never feign affection a socio-philosophical take on bland conversations that go on ad nauseum all around us... Mutterings and stutterings....really meaning nothing It would seem the more we are connected the lesser the connect among us…. nice poem on a less frequently mentioned topic in poetry liked

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Unwritten Soul 11 September 2013

Dont get tired, fresh up and encounter with bending mind..you will get in the zone of others mind_Soul

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