Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 45 Points (Montenegro)

Just Tired - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Simulation of a situation
As if controlled
Like we know people when we don't
And talk to them philially
So that something should be called
Interaction
Exchange
I am tired of it
Let's change


Comments about Just Tired by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Gold Star - 17,490 Points Sandra Feldman (9/14/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    I agree with you, there's very little sincere communication amongst humans. It always seems contrived, studied, hypocritical, hidden.....Openness does exist but encountered rarely, among best friends, perhaps? And now, with all this social electronic communication, personal self -expression may get worse or maybe better, if we know how to handle it. In any case, I liked your poem very much, everything that is expression and language touches me. I think you expressed beautifully that we should communicate more with our hearts and less with hypocrisy and protocol.Really, know people instead of pretending to know them. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Saadat Tahir (9/11/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    You reminded me of the well known adage
    never feign affection

    a socio-philosophical take on bland conversations that go on ad nauseum all around us...
    Mutterings and stutterings....really meaning nothing

    It would seem the more we are connected the lesser the connect among us….

    nice poem on a less frequently mentioned topic in poetry

    liked (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (9/11/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Dont get tired, fresh up and encounter with bending mind..you will get in the zone of others mind_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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