Justice Of The External Mind Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Justice Of The External Mind

Rating: 5.0


Slaves to the powers
of the external mind
If your innocent or guilty
they do not mind

Watching and waiting
to make their strike
They'll take you down
and watch you drown

As long as they get somebody
to make themselves proud
They won't care
that your mind is not all there

All over the world
The powers of the external mind
is watching you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Nicks 30 December 2011

Wonderful! You got me thinking now.

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Vipins Puthooran 13 December 2011

[But we cannot read other people mind] A g'd write! ! ! 10+++

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Sonali Sings 11 December 2011

Have your own stand then no mind can over power you i.e. realizing your own potential. Great write.

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Kamal Lalwani 10 December 2011

we have to make ourselves wake up, from all the illusions we dream on which r good for nothing so that it might help us from the justice of external mind.

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Unwritten Soul 10 December 2011

A pinch of reality...it's enough for this recipe to get flavor in life poetry.. you teach me again to beware with around and people's mind..Nice reminder, thanks for this advice Dave_Unwritten Soul

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