(k) 2 (God) That Is God Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(k) 2 (God) That Is God

Rating: 4.8


Waves of strength
Surging in You and Me
That is God, That is God

Stream of compassion
Flowing in You and Me
That is God, That is God

Trembling consciousness
Quivering in You and Me
That is God, That is God

Creative juices
Flowing in You and Me
That is God, That is God

Undying Spirit
Burning in You and Me
That is God, That is God

Throbbing Heart
Overflowing with love in You and Me
That is God, That is God

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 September 2006

Well, thank you, my dear...i am indeed blushingly honored....This is a beautifuly written piece....well structured and silken smooth even-flow....nice one, t.o....you rock, young lady! ''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Joshua Gilchrist 21 April 2009

Very nice....Spoken well.

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Duncan Wyllie 16 September 2006

This has really reached home, I love your profound words and style Love duncan X

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Preeti - is here! 04 September 2006

FJR has inspired me too, cause he saw an flickering fire in me, and his comments helped me to reach the stage where I am today! This is such a beautiful poem of appreciation. Nice :) BTW I've read a few of Amrita Pritam's poem, and they are out-of-this-world! Preets

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Moon Batchelder 03 September 2006

poet, rehearsing the muse to share that is god....that is god

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Patricia Gale 03 September 2006

A wonderful piece to go with a wonderful lady.

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