hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,166 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Keep Cool - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

They conspired to make me fool
To some extent they had successful too
I was drawn in their game and started loosing
Mind became restless to retaliate in their choosing

Suddenly it struck in mind
Third sense clicked to find
It was ploy
I must sensible employ

I brought down temper
They had made me to act as boiler
It was about to explode
I was saved by God

”You should never act in haste”
I had read somewhere of late
I watched them to speak as team
I provided no chance to them

Finally they got wind
I was spared of being called unkind
To some extent they had succeeded
But I had stayed firm and did not succumb

“Keep cool head”it was explained
In crisis some tempo has to be maintained
The brain should not be kept loose
Else the enemy may have sufficient ground to choose


Comments about Keep Cool by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    a little loose in definition Dawn Smith-Hines14 minutes ago It helps too read aloud what we write to check flow and tempo~ :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    Ngajay Tshering likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Ngajay Tshering
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  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2013 6:36:00 AM)

    good

    rameez gilani2 minutes ago
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2013 5:28:00 AM)

    They conspired to make me fool
    To some extent they had successful too (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013


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