Keep Full Hope Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Keep Full Hope

Rating: 5.0


Angry no more
Stay therefore
Happy and cheerful
Life has to be successful

Even during short stay
Make it memorable way
That people should exclaim
Your name with fame

Not all the flowers are liked
Yet flowers are flowers alike
Some may have more shine
Some may just look fine

Some flowers blossom for whole year
We feel them so near
Our eyes get little coolness
Cheeks turn red on face

Keep full hope
When flop
As there is light of ray
That may show the way

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Angry no more Stay therefore

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good job George Mcgaffin1 minute ago keep it up, the only critique I have is that sometimes it felt like the words were chosen just to rhyme Comment +1

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Re: Keep full hope (Score: 1) by zbird on Thursday, July 10,2014 (11: 44: 50) so true

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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 10 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Hasmukh Mehta welcome paniz sh Just now · Unlike · 1

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Colleen Courtney 03 July 2014

Interesting and enjoyable read Mehta!

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seasons in the sun graham millerLess than a minute ago with the right attitude, it can be summer all year round Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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