Kick Thy Bucket Faster... Poem by Kyle Shield Laster

Kick Thy Bucket Faster...

Rating: 2.9


Kick thy bucket faster-
To inspire young delight;
And when Death claims she's master,
Do smile you bright; so bright.

Wednesday, July 16, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: youth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 17 July 2008

it's quite clever how you have mixed a modern phrase like 'kick the bucket' with an older term like 'thy' giving this a time conflicted piece...nice work

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Tai Chi Italy 17 July 2008

The revision on this poem is absolutely fabulous Kyle and sends a great message, that we have to live life to the fullest and smile in the face of death, because he ain't scarey anymore! love it love it love it, smiling at you, Tai

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Autumn Jones 16 July 2008

I like this poem. And I think Death can sometimes be the master, it just depends on the circumtance and time. Very nice writing.

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Tai Chi Italy 16 July 2008

I think we all kick our buckets at varying paces in life kyle! I have never considered Death as being a master before, and still won't because death is a natural part of lifes cycle and the peddles move the wheel on! , on the slow train, Tai

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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