merna ibrahim

Kids - Poem by merna ibrahim

Oh! You are a little black boy,
and playing with your small toy.
Oh! You are black from outside,
but your heart and soul are white.

Your innocence is covering you,
from your head till your smallest toe.

You are behaving spontaneously.
You are naive, curious, innocent and asking continuously.
You are vivid at day, and tired at night.
You are a beautiful flower swaying with delight.

You and the whole children are a bless had been granted from the Lord.
And I consider you all as a noble reward.

(the children are great, they are from the biggest blesses that God granted to us.....I dedicate this poem to the whole kids on this planet 'the white and the black' they are both equal.'NO FOR RACISM'......)

Comments about Kids by merna ibrahim

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (11/27/2010 1:11:00 PM)

    Indeed adorable kids are n’ equally well penned enjoyed this poem much… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Merna
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • Rookie Rana Zalloum (9/7/2010 8:03:00 AM)

    kids are the best.... they dont know how to hurt and they make u smile deep down... great poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/25/2010 10:48:00 AM) well penned. Everything I stand for! All children are blessings from above. Well done my friend! ; D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (3/26/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    good done Dear Merna u r talented! that's it 'NO FOR RACISM'
    this beautiful poem reflects your kindness...
    a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lina Ehab (11/27/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    merna! ! ! ! u have 2 let people know ur talent, as 4 me i see u as a famous poet u r really talanted noone in ur age write this deep feelings that u have u should write in magazines or newspaper
    u really should i'm not kiddin! ! ! ! <3 <3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sara Here (8/13/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    Magnificent idea, brilliant writing and a superior theme.... can't pass by any of your poems without stopping a struggle inside to give a comment.Yet take it for all that is written and is to come I truly love your poems... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kuji Soliman (7/8/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    i loved the poem so much! ! ! ! and i also think'NO FOR RACISM' is nothing but fair! ! and the last few lines in the poem are spectacular! ! ! pls keep on the good work, , ,10000000/10! ! ! ! ! and if you dont mind i would like to appologize to all of the poets thati've stopped getting in touch's just cuz these past few days have been a little difficult! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (7/6/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    You and the whole children are a bless had been granted from the Lord.
    And I consider you all as a noble reward.
    a good and impressive poems written on hids..yes they deserve to be praised and loved...its really a good poem..and flow is melodic and interesting one... appreciate you for good job merna...10+++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/29/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    'Oh! You are black from outside,
    but your heart and soul are white'...

    nice expression there Merna...poetic...i liked the good message you convey through your good piece...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/28/2009 12:12:00 PM)

    this is just lovely. you are indeed a fine young poetess (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Reem Ehab (6/26/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    Thanks Merna for this poem, You refreshed our feelings again towards Kids, they are a special gift that we should take care of, so u explained these things without making a difference between the Black or White and this is fair. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (6/26/2009 7:47:00 AM)

    very good idea...........i give you 10++++ for your great work......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/26/2009 1:06:00 AM)

    For all the kids of the world..No to racism! Nice poetic protest...lovely penned! ! ! 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (6/25/2009 3:27:00 PM)

    brilliant piece to are very talented young lady...keep them coming...excellent share (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (6/25/2009 4:19:00 AM)

    thank you
    i liked this poem
    it made me smile good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/24/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    Oh! You are a little black boy,
    and playing with your small toy.
    Oh! You are black from outside,
    but your heart and soul are white.
    well done..this poem shows that you are great humanitariun and love every child of adam family and never care for colors, regions and cultures... thisis very good approach and I dream if we all think like that and bridge up the gaps between each others hearts being the humankinds and true cousins..appreciate you merna dear for this sweet poem...10+++++++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (6/24/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    wonderful write........ certainly kids are gifted......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/24/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    beautiful merna no racism i agree color shape nothing matters but we all are
    gods childrten 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (6/24/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    Blessed is Merna, who penns beatiful poems.........................a good write.......thanks for sharing.................keep up the good works...............10+++........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameer Ahmed (6/24/2009 1:19:00 PM)

    Indeed a very cute poem from a cute poetess. Kids are
    like pearls and require proper attention. They just complete
    the families and play a role as a contagion of happiness for
    all the people around......10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 26, 2011

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