Killer Inside Me Poem by Utsav Patel

Killer Inside Me

Rating: 4.6


Inside me....
A killer is king...
This reign will make me strong...
Strong enough to heal my wounds...
Heal my scars...

You don't give me a damn...
Never mind...
Feels like a disdained..
In this cruel world..
Killer Inside me....

Go..
We don't need another mess...
Go dig your grave...
Go drill your purple heart...
Then feel your mouth with all those money you'll save...
Killer inside me...

People called me psycho...
Hahaha...
Kill them all...
Give me sens...
I wanna sleep...
Killer Inside me...

Killer drag me to hell...
I wanna all morphine...
That black blood flows from my veins...
Killer Inside me...

Silence...
Emancipation...
In the end..
Killer murdered me...
That killer....
Still inside me in my grave....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very dark. I love emotion put in this poem. I was very tragic but nicely put. good job.

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Asif Andalib 05 December 2012

Dark poem is not my cup of tea but I don't know why I liked it

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Brianna Winebarger 07 December 2012

i like..it shows all the emotions that you have bottled up and how you see yourself. it sorta reminds me of my poems but yours is more structured and planned. nice job

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Darkangel Flyfree 09 December 2012

Dark and deep....deff my cup of tea....keep writing those words...let that anger out and it shall free you! ! !

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Zeenat Fatima 29 December 2012

A very deep thought! Well said..

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

Go drill your purple heart... Then feel your mouth with all those money you'll save... Killer inside me. Silence and emancipation at the end...... a great poem . strange thoughts with substance...... it makes one think. thank you dear poet

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Ayesha Tul Kubra 04 August 2014

That killer still inside me in my grave. That's the coolest line. Now I'm also thinking to write poem on such a theme. good work!

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Mary Amrutha 26 November 2013

u r a killerrrrrrrrrrr oMG... hahaha am ovr laughing... but nice work but dnt want u to kill any one broh...

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Patricia Grantham 04 September 2013

This is a very powerful write. If you would put all of that pent up emotion in your poems and keep penning it makes for very positively charged writes. You're an excellent Poet.

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Aya Nasr 01 September 2013

you killed me inside hahahaha i loved it, good lines

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Utsav Patel

Utsav Patel

Surat, Gujarat, India
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