I thought I knew you
Long ago and far away
In another world.
Thoughts in unison
Memories of yesterday
When love was sweeter.
Maybe I know you
Something so familiar now
Thaws my frozen heart.
Words I long to hear
Whisper from your trembling lips
Touch my very soul.
Heal my broken heart
Kiss my wounds and make me whole
Let me live again.
This is so simply portrayed and so elegant in the penning. Herbert's right. Not a word out of place. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx
You've just proved something I've suspected for a while. The Haiku series can concentrate and reinforce a message, without over-embellishment. Excellent. Danny
A very moving poem containing depth and distance, and a sincere tribute to the power of love.
Splendid flow.. perhaps a past love reborn for the continuation.
A fine piece of crafting, Midnight...Tight, crisp, versage....pleasingly serene language Solid work, here, Nurse Ori... F. j. R.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice. You have managed to say only a few words but have missed nothing. H