Kindred Spirits Poem by Linda Ori

Kindred Spirits

Rating: 3.3


I thought I knew you
Long ago and far away
In another world.

Thoughts in unison
Memories of yesterday
When love was sweeter.

Maybe I know you
Something so familiar now
Thaws my frozen heart.

Words I long to hear
Whisper from your trembling lips
Touch my very soul.

Heal my broken heart
Kiss my wounds and make me whole
Let me live again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 28 January 2007

Very nice. You have managed to say only a few words but have missed nothing. H

0 0 Reply
Alison Cassidy 28 January 2007

This is so simply portrayed and so elegant in the penning. Herbert's right. Not a word out of place. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

0 0 Reply
Danny Reynolds 07 February 2007

You've just proved something I've suspected for a while. The Haiku series can concentrate and reinforce a message, without over-embellishment. Excellent. Danny

0 0 Reply
Chuck Audette 31 January 2007

Sweet little love poem, very emotive. -chuck

0 0 Reply
jim hogg 28 January 2007

A very moving poem containing depth and distance, and a sincere tribute to the power of love.

0 0 Reply
Patricia Gale 28 January 2007

Splendid flow.. perhaps a past love reborn for the continuation.

0 0 Reply
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 January 2007

A fine piece of crafting, Midnight...Tight, crisp, versage....pleasingly serene language Solid work, here, Nurse Ori... F. j. R.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success