Silver teardrops random fell,
Kissed by moonlight on her face,
Touched by soft carressing lips,
Until a smile, had took their place
Shadows cast on sullen eyes,
Passed as if the sun had shone,
The twilight slowly crept away,
Twas then I knew her life was gone.
mmmm this is very good. I love short poems, easy to read and yet meaningful. Ruth
You take a subject and with the alchemy of a wizard turn it into gold. Susan
You have made something so well crafted and special out of something very sad. The words you use are gentle and kind and winsome and sweet. My sympathies are with you. Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is beautiful, Laurie, really beautiful. Keep writing and sharing. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn