Kissed By Moonlight Poem by Laurie hill

Kissed By Moonlight

Rating: 5.0


Silver teardrops random fell,
Kissed by moonlight on her face,
Touched by soft carressing lips,
Until a smile, had took their place
Shadows cast on sullen eyes,
Passed as if the sun had shone,
The twilight slowly crept away,
Twas then I knew her life was gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 19 February 2009

This is beautiful, Laurie, really beautiful. Keep writing and sharing. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Dolan Doran 19 February 2009

wow..thats...amazing..so beautiful.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 12 May 2009

An emotional read - a loving farewell, I cannot find words

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Ruth Walters 01 May 2009

mmmm this is very good. I love short poems, easy to read and yet meaningful. Ruth

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Rosalita Fernandez 11 April 2009

beautiful

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Susan Bagley 06 March 2009

You take a subject and with the alchemy of a wizard turn it into gold. Susan

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You have made something so well crafted and special out of something very sad. The words you use are gentle and kind and winsome and sweet. My sympathies are with you. Karin Anderson

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