'Knocking On Heaven's Door' Poem by Linda Winchell

'Knocking On Heaven's Door'

Rating: 5.0


I went knocking on Heaven's door today
but no one came to the door to see.
Who was making all that knocking noise
for it was just, little old me!

I guess they might all still be sleeping?
Or maybe out shopping, at Heaven's Grocery store?
So I guess I'd better continue
just knocking, knocking on Heaven's door?

As I gazed in through leaded glass windows
of those golden Heaven's doors.
There on knees was seen an Angel crying!
who cried out, ' God doesn't live here anymore! '

'He went to earth yesterday
to fight earths war, with His Angels you see!
And left me here to man Heaven's doors
but I've seemed to have misplace their keys! '

I can't seem to let you in right now
so can you come back maybe, another time?
I will let you know if I find the keys later
I'll be sure to send you, an Angel's Knee Mail line.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 November 2008

For once, I' d almost knocking on Heaven's door, but God 'd declined to enlist me cuz he'd thought Earth needs me so badly.Havin said that, yes we would soon! Great piece Linda.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 November 2008

Refreshingly new concept; so well written. Thanks....10

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Marilyn Lott 17 November 2008

God is very busy on earth these days but keep knocking and keep writing your poems, Linda. A '10! ' from me, my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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