Oh! love of mine
So true and kind
Forgive my fears
That've kept you near
I understand your plan's divine
Our days were numbered
From the very start
By someone wiser
That comes from afar.
There are greater missions
To aid those oppressed
Who cry out for justice
Who toil in despair.
From the very moment
We take our first breath
The plan has been started
Our Mission is set.
We fight and we struggle
Just to stay alive
At times that mission
Is least on our mind.
But there comes a day
When the mind is clear
Where your senses tell you
There's nothing to fear.
Your path you must follow
By hand or alone
The stars have predicted
Your calling is known.
Life in our hands and how to live it....up to us. Affirmative poem and inner strength was so obvious in each stanza. Excellent! ! ! !
Nice wrote about the human connection and affection towards compassion and sacrifice to better life/ world. I found the poetess had gained her strength and faith to follow the sincere calling. Well done.
i think it's safe to say that our writings are similar :) Nicely expressed. Clear and resonatingThank you for this nice poem.
From the very moment We take our first breath The plan has been started Our Mission is set. Beautiful stanza Luz. We have been sent out here with a set program. With a mission, HE decides to each and everyone of us. Inspiring poem 10+
This is a beautiful spiritual poem related to life having touching expression and nice collocation. The life process has been duly planned by God. It has been nicely inscribed by you as follows...... Our days were numbered From the very start By someone wiser That comes from afar. Thanks for sharing this gem.10
Your path you must follow, when we start moving to our destination, the destination also starts moving towards us. A great and thoughtful poem.
But there comes a day When the mind is clear Where your senses tell you There's nothing to fear....follow your path, and go forward into the hands of the Eternal....... you are always spiritual dear poet. i love it.. tony
A nice poem with deep thoughts. A poem of strength, a poem of confidence.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Has a nice beat to it, the subtle rhymes are great, it flows very gracefully!