Lady Poem by Kayode Ogunleye

Lady

Rating: 5.0


A beautiful flower
Blooming in a sunny world
Twinkling like a star in the sky
Chaste in mind and body
All men long to touch her
As soon as it is plucked
Off goes the beauty
Nobody wants her any more
When she complains,
She’s thrown out for others
To pick and drop
Like the first time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lovemo Queen 31 March 2008

You made your point very clear in a clever way of explaining it. This is also an intresting and delicate subject to talk about and i think that u managed that very well. Over all it was a great piece of work! :)

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Stella Sisanda Qishi 01 April 2008

well, guys can be so heartless sometimes.

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Katie Tarnasky 09 April 2008

wow thisn an amazing poem

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Bill Webb 12 April 2008

Wonderful. Empathetic and compassionate, without being stilted or flowery.

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Riquetta Elliott 16 April 2008

What beautiful poem Ogunleye keep it up.

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A good poem and I interested it.

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Heather Wilkins 24 August 2013

excellent write once a lady not always a lady

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 September 2008

Fact disclosed... nice.10.

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Jerry Abrahamson 24 April 2008

Lovely poem..keep it up...you're doing great

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Jerry Abrahamson 24 April 2008

Lovely poem..keep it up...you're doing great

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