Laguna Beach Poem by Lucius Furius

Laguna Beach

Rating: 5.0


Lounging in the dry warmth of the sun,
overcome by the beauty of the green cliffs
rising above the hypnotic blue water....

I think of Mann's The Magic Mountain,
obsession with the physical
(not, in this case, disease, of course,
but the sensual) :

skin glowing in the year-round sun;
ripe fruit
falling into one's hand;
air, rich with the smell of flowers....

Wouldn't such pleasure
inevitably dull the mind's keen edge?

Wouldn't Eden's ease
subvert all great endeavor?

Friday, May 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,sensual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is one of the Humanist Art Homepage, Scraps of Faith poems.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 26 May 2017

It is the charming landscape merging with human sensibilities that makes it so sensuous. Thanks.

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Lucius Furius 03 July 2017

Glad you liked it, Rajnish. It was based on an actual experience I had at Laguna Beach.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 May 2017

Warmth of the sun..... a big 10++++++++

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Lucius Furius 03 July 2017

Glad you liked it, Bernard. This poem was based on an actual experience I had at Laguna Beach.

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