Laity Vs Nobility Poem by chandra thiagarajan

Laity Vs Nobility

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Ordinary people—the Laity
Mediocre persons—the commonality
Eat and walk
Sleep and talk
Perform small acts
In the same tracts
Without constraint
Making several mistakes
With little knowledge found.

Exalted people—the Nobility
Persons with calibre—of dignity
Also eat and walk
Sleep and talk
But perform great acts
With wisdom and tact
With self – restraint
Executing work sans mistakes
With ample knowledge sound.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 19 July 2013

As a species we are all capable of doing great things. A good write.

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Valsa George 20 July 2013

Those who have wisdom and tact and self restraint are sure to succeed in life and they stand head and shoulders above people who have little knowledge and simply eat and sleep through life! Enjoyed the rhythm and the content of the poem! !

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Heather Wilkins 30 July 2013

there are many lessons to be learned, and we learn by doing. good write

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2013

a very tough question. first of all what is the scale to measure. start from Adam n Eve. take the instance of Ram or Ravan, Krishna or Kansha but there r some person who becomes the preacher but still they seek for Nirvana. rest are common due to whom the existence of mankind.i do not feel any grnd mistake other than to hurt our fellowmen. thnx for exploring such grnd issue. with regards.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 July 2013

Learning from mistakes and correcting oneself is more important. Nicely said.

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Kavya . 22 July 2013

a nice comparison given on laity vs nobility.........enjoyed the read

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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2013

Agree with David, we are all capable of something worthwhile. Interesting write.

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