Lamplight Poem by Susan Ashdown

Lamplight

Rating: 5.0


She sits in the lamplight and
with carefully crafted quill
pens out her most precious thoughts.
She loves him still.

He fell asleep so long ago and
is resting peaceful now
not a day goes by without thoughts of him
and not one moment ever will.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Shepherd 22 March 2005

Nothing more and nothing less than the others...

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Rusty Daily 22 March 2005

You have accomplished the want of every poet. So many emotions with so few words. Well done. Rusty

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Christine Magee 22 March 2005

Extremely beautiful and poignant words, Sue. Chrissie :)

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Cj Heck 22 March 2005

Good Morning, Susan - This is beautiful - heartfelt thoughts lovingly crafted. Poetic hugs, CJ

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Susan Ashdown

Susan Ashdown

East Sussex, England
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