Land Of Mer Poem by Young and Smart

Land Of Mer

Rating: 4.3


The Demons are those who make small children cry,
But those who cry are prayed upon at night,
For their time is nigh
When the Demons are visible to human sight

To see the screaming beings go
Being dragged by the Devil’s creatures
The time is near- The once gently image of the moon is gaining an eerie glow
The poor children… Taken by the things with such atrocious features

The screams have stopped
The Moon has retreated, bringing the Demons with her
All these grimacing memories must be locked
Inside of the Demon’s playground; The land of Mer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayesha Ahmad 23 June 2007

that is soooooooooooooo cute i love your poems they touch my heart

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purple moon 05 July 2007

very nice...........now i am afraid.

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How young and how smart - And should this matter to you? In the land of mer, I would think age and wisdom would protect you. But then it doesn't matter does it? Just playing with you. good stuff! Cheryl

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 29 September 2007

you are definitely young and smart. your poem is moving. i love it

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Random Crap 31 August 2007

Wow this is so amazing. Its really imaginative and creative, well done! x-x-x

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Shelby messed 16 August 2007

well written please read some of mine if you haven't all ready shelby

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Jennifer Unknown 14 August 2007

This is an incredible piece. Very creative.

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WILFRED JOHN 09 August 2007

Dear Magiee your poem is very inspiring.actually you are a gifted poet. we seldom forget to honour poets in their life time but after death we give them praise i.e. John Donne who was a great poet please read my poems and criticise me. with love and regards Wilfred John

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