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Lateef Jan Afridi Ab.latif jan

(22.april.1981 / Bragg Valley)

Last Breath


From those around I hear a Cry
A muffled sob, a Hopeless sigh
I hear their footsteps leaving slow
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  • Marieta Maglas (8/6/2009 9:38:00 AM)

    ''They lay me with my record flawed
    They cry, not knowing I cry worse
    For, they go home, I face my God''
    nice rational poem, nice ode to God........10 (Report) Reply

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