Last Friday Night Poem by Cake Heart

Last Friday Night



Take a drag
Feeling light
Take a sip
It’s alright
It’s Friday night

With my friends
Having fun
We’re so young
Before it’s done
One last run

Lost control
My final sip
I couldn’t think
So there’s the slip
And my flip

Stupid mistake
Now it’s gone
I should’ve listened
I was wrong
I was drawn
To those drinks
And those drags
My last Friday night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aira Olayvar 19 April 2010

Nicely dedicated to the drunkard and stubborn. The message of your poem is mind-awakening. That’s good, continue writing. Drinking and taking liquor can do good for the body if not too much because the body needs alcohol and that’s a fact, but for those who could not intake liquors you still can have the alcohol contents that your body needs by eating fruits. Socializing is a part of the human life circulation, sometimes we have to give a sip and make merry with our friends but we must always know our limits.

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