Last Night Poem by David Darbyshire

Last Night

Rating: 5.0


I ran around the world
yesterday evening and
that morning I
swam the Atlantic

Last night I sailed
the seven seas
this morning I survived
a Tiger and Shark Attack

I cannot find enough
things to do
So I going to start
writing Love poems for you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well you sure got off to a fine start after a dreamy night David! Like this piece in its romantic simplicity.

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Francesca Johnson 07 June 2006

So you've been a bit busy the past few days, eh? Feet sore? Or 'foot' should I say, ha ha! Love, Fran the Fan xx

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Elya Thorn 05 June 2006

This is such a perfect poem, very very well written, it flows so easily, and the emotions you describe stired me inside too! Beautiful! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Dee Daffodil 05 June 2006

Great write Dave....watch those sharks tho! Nasty! You've obviously had a very busy weekend! LOL Hugs, dee

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Patricia Gale 05 June 2006

Nightmares? No love, oh my what a combination! lol Patricia

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Duncan Wyllie 05 June 2006

This wakes me up, cool water for the face, our fine man Dave has done it again 10 from a much enjoying your work, Duncan X

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