Last Time Poem by Asha Brown

Last Time

Rating: 4.8


this is the last time some dude makes me cry
the last time i crumble and fall apart
this is the last time i'll feel like i wanna die
last time i give any man my heart
this is the last time i put some dude first
the last time i put myself last
this is the last time i settle for his happiness alone
last time i sacrifice my smile and my laugh
this is the last time a dude gets me to swallow my pride
last time i sit around moping and waiting
this is the last time i trust a man for the peacefulness in his eyes
last time i sit and watch the world around me fading
this is the last time a dude gets my love
the last sad ending cuz i wont let another start
this is the last time i cry myself to sleep over a man
last time im left
with a broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vivek Tiwari 03 January 2013

Good poem. Keep writing in your own style coz as Wordsworth says Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings. Diction doesn't matter coz there are a lot of most popular poems of blank rhyme. Just don't let the soul of poem be killed. 10 Votes

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Vikas Sharma 03 January 2013

Try rhyming.... Will Give A Better Effect

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Asha Brown

Asha Brown

Hampton, Virginia
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