Leave Shoes Outside Please Poem by Mary Havran

Leave Shoes Outside Please

Rating: ★4.5


build me a poem like a Japanese house
stark black words set against
crisp white paper wall

elaborate phrases eliminate
rhetorical excess dismiss
shoes left outside

clear minded
direct
pure

Mary Havran
Sunday, November 18, 2007
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Con Nie 27 January 2008

Very Good. A ten! Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Lalaine Layumas 28 December 2007

In my country we do leave shoes outside (keeping home nicely) . this is a clean poem too.

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Basil Demple 21 November 2007

Fine. Simple. Elegant.

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