Let Him Know....My Dear Star Poem by sharon kolluri

Let Him Know....My Dear Star

Rating: 5.0


I see stars far up there,
I feel cold by this air...

No matter how much, u made me cry,
I keep your promise, at least i'll try...

Though there are many, i feel alone
This is my wish, wanna hear your tone...

No one hears me, even i yell
but you are around me, i know it well...

I still sense the warmth in your touch
I feel so poor, even i am rich...

Your words sooth me, but still i strive
Me without u, why to stay alive...

I shall see you, one day i will
Tell HIM star, to wait up until...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A girl is telling these lines to a star in the sky, to pass this message to her love. He left and went for job sake, telling her that he will be coming soon. But it has been years.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Teja 22 November 2013

i'll let him know! ! !

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Krishna Hyderabad 19 November 2013

its good. feeling of girl is senstivly expressed

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