The Queen's Dagger

Rookie (July 31 1997 / Vermont)

Let It Out - Poem by The Queen's Dagger

From the moment I saw you,
I knew that something was wrong.
What makes you laugh makes others cry,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was almost at this point until recently and I was remembering what it felt like. This is to remind everyone who is going through a hard time right now that someone cares. It was intended to be a song, that is why one part is repeated 3 times, by the way.

Comments about Let It Out by The Queen's Dagger

  • Rookie Adriana Avila (6/12/2013 8:52:00 AM)

    There is love, and empathy in this write. Good job.

    Blessings, AA (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/13/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    There is a lot of pain in this poem/song but healing and hope through out.
    Very good message in a memorable format. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie William Marion (6/13/2012 3:01:00 AM)

    Ok we got rookie here. I just signed up and wanted to say how real this poem was for me because its me the boy in the poem with the red wrists. everyday is a fucking battle to do everything. suicide is constantly on my damn mind. Great stuff im excited about this website. Oh and Elizabeth dont worry about putting a label on it. IT is what it is. So thank you and i Leave you with words from the Great Bob Dylan. If i can sing it? then its a song, If i cant sing it? then its Poetry. simple as that.

    P.S. IM ok im not gonna off myself tonight i will let you know before i hit the hard road.
    William Morrison (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deci Hernandez (6/12/2012 10:22:00 AM)

    if i ever become an english teacher i would share to the class do not go lonely into that good night and possibly this poem. it very sad how our brothers and sisters reach this moment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (6/12/2012 9:38:00 AM)

    A great poem, I loved it and it does sound like a song, but a very good one. (Report) Reply

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