Let Me... Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Let Me...

Rating: 5.0


Let me live in your dreams
Let me awake in memories
Let me dance in your breath
Let me smile in your smile
Let me die in your eyes

Let me...Let me...Let me...

Let me sing in your heart
Let me sleep in your shade
Let me be in your song
Let me beat in your beat
Let me die in your eyes

Let me...Let me...Let me...

Let me flow in your tears
Let me burn in your pain
Let me wet in your rain
Let me cry in your cry
Let me die in your eyes

Let me...Let me...Let me...

Let me shine in your glow
Let me bloom in your joy
Let me die in your eyes
Let me die in your eyes
But let me die...in your eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 12 November 2009

Sounded like a song to me...

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rago rago 12 November 2009

let me say it is beautiful to chant about you..........nice da.............

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 November 2009

Let me congratulate you for so many 'Let mes' in your poem.

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Catrina Heart 16 November 2009

Let me shine in your glow Let me bloom in your joy Let me die in your eyes Let me die in your eyes But let me die...in your eyes ----- stunning piece..........

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Marieta Maglas 15 November 2009

Let me shine in your glow wonderful lyric poem 10+++++++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 November 2009

Let me write a poem on your heart.......a good write...

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Antonio Liao 12 November 2009

what a romantic poem...every word penetrate what the heart want.....especially the last line.... so sweet to die with love in your arm....you make my morning alive my friend....thank you and God bless...a 10 +

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Joseph Poewhit 12 November 2009

Shows real togetherness

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