Let Me Paint Your Portrait ♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Let Me Paint Your Portrait ♥

Rating: 5.0


By borrowing - - -)
colours from rainbow
Fragrance from flowers
Gorge and meander from river
Ridges and seracs from mountain
Oasis and mirage from desert
Streams and waterfalls from landscape
Feathers and chisel from birds
And then put the human soul.

Sunday, September 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Meaning of words with brief Explanation
Gorge is a steep-sided river valley which is very narrow and deep.
Meander is a bend in a river.. (This will make her figure very attractive)
Ridges refer to the crests that radiate out and down from a mountain peak (This will make her face unbelievable)
Seracs are exceptionally unstable and can fall at any time without warning (This will truly reflect the mood swings and emotions)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 30 July 2020

Nice portrait I liked it.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 20 September 2015

Verily, a lovely poem full of lovely imagery

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T Rajan Evol 20 September 2015

I agree with Sanjukta's comments vividness is very much evident in your poem.

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Sanjukta Nag 20 September 2015

oh what a beautiful portrait filled with vividness. loved it.

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