Let Me Rise Like Sun Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Let Me Rise Like Sun

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Sun is powerful filled with rays
Rays travel very long, long way.
I know science evaluates these
I want to spread rays of life.

I am in power of my conscience
This calls me to rise like sun
With rays of wisdom I paint life
Mind commands to do so eagerly.

Sun is helpful to all creatures
I also need to help others more
Purity is my identity of resolve
I can rise as I am self light.

Although I am a very tiny soul
Still I can light up far galaxy
Sitting in meditation I think
I am stable to spread vibrations.

Let me rise like sun in each sky
In far galaxy let me spread light
To sing glory of father I am ready
Father of heaven commands to rise.

Wednesday, November 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Jayaraman 04 November 2015

An ode to the rising sun, thanks for sharing.

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Milan Panda 15 October 2020

Making sun as an ideal leader of mind is nice to gain light of wisdom of God. This poem is very nice.

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Valsa George 07 May 2019

I see you rise like the sun! Your intentions and your ardent efforts to light up other lives are so appreciable! You are able to create positive vibrations in many hearts through your thoughts and your poems. Your power comes from God, the eternal light! Beautiful poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 April 2016

Filled with rays! To respect creation. Thanks for sharing.

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Chuy Amante 05 November 2015

indeed Son rises and He spreads his Sunshine rising to Daddy feeling what is blesses words you've share on many levels peace

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

Such a wonderful poem with magical lines..Let me rise like sun in each sky, In far galaxy let me spread light....Awesome lines, Sir

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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