Let Me Venture Into The Sea Poem by M D Dinesh Nair

Let Me Venture Into The Sea

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Let me first venture into the sea
To be just washed ashore later
And I will feel you breathing life unto me
After you have come in search for me.

I shall hold a pendant in my shivering hands
And shall give it to you at once
As it's a valuable sea treasure, you have to know
That none else can give you, my dear.

On the pendant of my love for sure
You will read a message engraved
By the mermaids sitting on the amber throne
Their princess being undone by you dear.

I shall smile to the sea for once
Even though her mysteries are beyond my reach
And she is far stretched out into depths of charms
That I never craved for you are there.

And you can see me smiling to end
And my love will bloom unto a rose
With thorns no more please...
Venturing into the sea again may kill me dear.

As they're either under the sea or playing alone
Those mermaids shall never be on my minds
Let no sighs be surging forth
From the amber throne of the most yellowish maid.

Let me first venture into the sea, dear,
I hope to be washed ashore later
And I want to feel you breathing life unto me
And won`t you come in search of me?

Sunday, June 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Beautiful romantic poem filled with mystery. Quiet interesting lines... Is it possible to venture into sea, just to be washed later...... .....And my love will bloom unto a rose ....With thorns no more please....Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 30 June 2014

I wonder what is engraved on that pendant.....! Like the mysterious message encoded, this poem written in your mysterious style speaks of a mysterious love. Enjoyed!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 June 2014

lovely romantic write, with a wonderful end.

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Colleen Courtney 29 June 2014

A beautiful and very creative write. Mermaids are always sure to enchant the reader!

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2014

A touch of mystery and allure surrounds your loved one, she appears to be an enigma, you have more questions than answers about her. The revealing lines And my love will bloom unto a rose With no more thorns please...... It is an exquisite portrayal of your loved one that fascinates and intrigues you! !

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