hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 23,623 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Let poets speak


Do not be surprised
As it has comprised
Many ways to disregard
If intentionally looked forward

I observed with keen interest
And served with best
But what happened in return!
My comments dashed against wall in turn

Well, the right attitude will be
Not to think much and feel free
Yet that thought did not cut much ice
I forgot my commitment with promise

Some of the writers/poets feel
They can be at liberty to fill
The void with little connivance
You do for me and I do for you with chance

Even if we lift the golden page from nature
It will speak of no such pressure
You throw stone at tree
In return, you may get fruit for free

Let poets speak themselves
And simply behave
With greater realization
That it needs much more for foundation

Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 23,623 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2014 9:13:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Bhai, the following line I liked very much: You do for me and I do for you with chance. Certainly composing poems has become some sort of cooperative movement.



    KH Prabbu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134
    Aug 26,2014 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,623 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    Olivia Kent Poets feel inspiration from all things rarely a day passes where im not inspired by something. I am alive hence i write xx your words are lovely x 3 mins · Unlike · 1 Hasmukh Mehta oh welcome dear Just now · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,623 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 8:55:00 AM)

    Nice composition! Especially the lines - You throw stone at tree In return, you may get fruit for free are wonderful to read!
    18 minutes ago by T A Ramesh | Reply (Report) Reply

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