Letter To God Poem by sania harris
Letter To God
Respected beloved teacher
I hear that you are close to god
If you shall not truly mind
Will you hand on this to him?
Tell him to remind Santa
That I want my daddy for Christmas
It’s been three years since I saw him
And so Christmas is such a bore!
Why is he in prison?
What crime has he done?
Taking him away from his son…
What fun do you gain?
Last Christmas I had sent a letter
With hope and love and desire
But the post man brought it back
Saying that the Lord was busy
Then I sent one to Santa
Knowing that he would read
He replied saying yes
But now I know he forgot
If god you forget to tell Santa
Don’t worry, I won’t cry
I’ll jus wait another year
And remind you over again
(INSPIRED BY THE LETTER SENT BY ANAS JAMIL EL-BANNA TO TONY BLAIR BECAUSE HIS FATHER WAS TAKEN TO PRISON FOR NO REASON AND HE FELT LONELY DURIN EID)
DECEMBER 20,2008
Congrats Sania. This is the way to write poetry; u picked up a very good subject and dealt it rightly.......well done.
Very good thought...All are quite often praying...but ur idea of sending God a letter is novel...keep going....
Nice poem Sania........ yes! I know all needs tym, , , , , , , , , , , but I have to write 50 poems....for the completion of 500....... as I ve to delet sum f ma poems......... because dey r not poems............ jus an expression........ thanx for sharing.... regards with luv n care..... bye n TC....
a heart wrenching piece.this brought tears in my eyes, my dear. Lovely write.I love it. Love and hugs, Meggie
wow really a beautiful letter to God i liked it--superbly written -10 anjali
This is a fine poem Sania. You have penned the irony of the situation with a skill that belies your tender years (and I don't mean to be patronizing here) . I love the way you personalize both God and Santa, as if they were ordinary sort of people, not holier than thou grand ideas that float about in people's heads. And the final line shows that sort of passive resistance that enabled Nelson Mandella to survive in prison for so long. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
nice poem my friend, I am checkig out your poetry after reading one about your mom, bravo, although u r not who I thought.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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waa sania....no words to describe this poem.....i was spellbound goin thr your lines.... 'If god you forget to tell Santa Don’t worry, I won’t cry I’ll jus wait another year And remind you over again '........these lines adds more credit to your work.......... ...............Sebastine 10+..........