Lettin Go In A Relationship. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Lettin Go In A Relationship.

Rating: 4.9


a relationship is always rough,
and sometimes i love you is not enough,
sometimes breaking up is for the better,
sometimes you think you can make it thru the weather,
sometimes you wanna keep holding on,
but by this time the pain is only moving on,
sometimes is better just to let go,
and sometimes is just best to say no,
what was once strong is now weak,
your heart took a taste of defeat,
sometimes all thats left is to say goodbye,
but you'll always wish you gave it one last try.

1/06/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marie Murphy Griffin 06 January 2009

Wow that was incredible

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Miriam Maia Padua 11 January 2009

lovely write...with nice flowing words... the painful and beautiful side of a relationship.... sad but at the same time still pleasing to the heart.... to learn to let go and accept without so much pain... reality on the feelings of breaking up....10++++++ Care to read my piece too? thanks......

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Genesis Learny 11 January 2009

another good one Jose! its truly relatable.its about experiencing the hardships og a relationship and its such a burden on anyone who lives within it.thanks for another emotional poem.

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lisa moore 11 August 2009

brilliant work again.. i do not doubt that all your poems are brilliant... keep writing.. luv lisa xo : -)

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sumaira .....ir 19 January 2009

I am deeply in love wit your poem.. It has a soft and gentle touch of love... Lovely writin... +++10 for this..

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Sade Blue 16 January 2009

Sometimes you have to say goodbye even if you are still in love with them and the end its for the best

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You are right sometimes breaking up is better I like that part because it is so true people don't realize that sometimes.. You write great I read this one because the title got my eyes.. Great piece Krista

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Ivor Hogg 14 January 2009

Sometimes the ability to no more is a blessing Why suffer tryong to breathe life into a dead relationship

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