Letting This Mind Travel Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Letting This Mind Travel

Rating: 1.5


Easy-going, laid-back, relaxing in fantasies of musical
rhythms, letting this mind travel along their measures.

Going into other dimensions and universes where intellect
surprises us by turning them into realities instead of
dreams of make-believe.

Our minds are so powerful and intense, if we just focus
them into depths of our spirituality, we'll find all
good ideas and thoughts coming from within.

Monday, September 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Staley 14 September 2015

Definitely speaks of the poem we hold subconsciously. Thought provoking, but written in a way that the reader soon forgets the poem. If I may advise, try for a bit more strength of sound, (maybe some meter or rhyme, or a tad harsher language) but be encouraged because you show the strength of idea in this poem.

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