Liberty Poem by Sayantan Dutta

Liberty

Rating: 5.0


I was leaning over to you
Looking at your eyes
I saw the dimly lit hope
Carefully asking, 'Back to me? '

I was fighting with me
Ignoring the pain
I was making it easy
To let you ask, 'Why you? '

I was counting the seconds
Inviting the inevitable
I couldn't wait anymore
To free you from crying

I was masking my heart
I was screaming in despair
I was lurching in the darkness
To save you from disgrace

Then on a fine fine morning
You came out of chains and doubts
And showered on me infinite love
As the bell of liberty sounded in our ears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

All the chains of waiting and apprehension unbuckled finally shining smiling dawn surfaced…into coveted Liberty Nice diction 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ayan Dasgupta 24 May 2010

I see all those lines Put down by a friend And think: I myself Could've penned those instead Words don't come easy You can master the trend But the life asks for life There's a price to be paid.

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