Liberty Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Liberty

Rating: 5.0


Liberty means freedom from captivity
Independently one can do within rules
Be sure liberty is the abode of happiness
Eagerness in wisdom is liberty too
Righteous work you do and enjoy liberty
Torture never to anybody, bring peace
You will be a deity if you have virtues.

Thursday, August 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: liberty,spirituality,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The first capital letter of each line spells the word 'Liberty'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 31 August 2017

A very wise poem, liberty must have rules within, only peace makes true freedom, no torture to anyone, Full makes for this poem with true wisdom.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2017

Date & Time: 8/31/2017 1: 00: 00 PM Muzahidul Reza (8/31/2017 1: 00: 00 PM) Wrote review on this poem: : : Be sure liberty is the abode of happiness, great write on liberty. (Essence of his review)

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2019

Virtue! Positiveness! ! To bring peace to the World. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Carl Roussell 29 April 2018

I like the poem, and I will have to try my hand at this style of writing. Thanks for posting and introduction to this style of poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2018

THIS IS PAGE 3: These are kinds of invisible conquering great parts of the world, again no Liberty for mankind. BUT you wrote a wondrous Acrostic as I said on prime here. when I started. I am accustomed to read your (at the least) five stanzas poetry, and this is a seven-liner poem. But you still excell in this. My two thumbs up, Sir! I have enjoyed and appreciated most your words full of wisdom. A 10 for the Vote and much-much more.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2018

THIS IS PAGE 2: Out of our sight, out of our ears, there is still slavery, de l'exploitation de l'homme par l'homme as our President constantly said, at that moment about the communist party and the communists which were invading my beautiful homeland.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2018

I must shortened my comment as PH advised me, aha between the 30-500 words. Can anyone explain? This is PAGE ONE: Wondrous Acrostic, my well meant compliments, Mr. Mahakul. BUT Liberty do not always mean freedom from captivity. How many people are deprived of this subject?

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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