Treasure Island

Palas Kumar Ray

(India)

Liberty To Go


If you feel you should go, I'll not say no
Even if I become sad I'll not stop you.

Not that if I don't, mean it I love you little less
I'll also be sad as you'll break embrace.

If you feel it wise, I'll agree with you
together we'll break, together we'll go.

Know my love for you, not for a bird in a cage
together we'll fly away, together we'll stage.

Neither I'll blame you nor you'll blame me.
Together we'll claim, we were never meant to be.

Soon we shall go far away, as afar as we can
We will together go, let us together plan.







© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Submitted: Saturday, November 08, 2008
Edited: Saturday, June 07, 2014

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  • Kesav Easwaran (12/5/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    two birds dwell in a single 'cage of heart'... together could be, yes... and could be not at times...as we see from this write...10 (Report) Reply

  • Marilyn Lott (11/16/2008 11:18:00 AM)

    Relationships can be so difficult and sometimes we must say goodbye. It is seldom easy and our lives have been touched by this person from the past. But sometimes it's the only way. I enjoyed your poem, Palas, good job! A '10! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Mamta Agarwal (11/16/2008 9:28:00 AM)

    letting go, saying it didn't work out, wasn't meant to be- is hard. yes, evey one is allowed to follow their dreams. even if you try to be brave, you suffer for some time. poignant write palas.10

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/16/2008 2:08:00 AM)

    Love makes you libral but binds together as well. One should not have a feeling of possessiveness to whome he or she loves. Just let it be......., (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (11/15/2008 5:43:00 PM)

    Good-byes are always sad. I hope that this one was not forever.
    Very poignant.10 for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Trinity K (11/9/2008 6:05:00 PM)

    never let go.. never hold...
    just let it be...thats love.........! ! !

    its so nice to read your poetry...! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Who Iam (11/8/2008 10:22:00 AM)

    The test of true love sometimes needs revisited to assure eac other it is meant to be.
    Well done, another ten from me. (Report) Reply

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