Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

Liberty To Go - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

If you feel you should go, I'll not say no
Even if I become sad I'll not stop you.

Not that if I don't, mean it I love you little less
I'll also be sad as you'll break embrace.

If you feel it wise, I'll agree with you
together we'll break, together we'll go.

Know my love for you, not for a bird in a cage
together we'll fly away, together we'll stage.

Neither I'll blame you nor you'll blame me.
Together we'll claim, we were never meant to be.

Soon we shall go far away, as afar as we can
We will together go, let us together plan.







© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.


Comments about Liberty To Go by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/5/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    two birds dwell in a single 'cage of heart'... together could be, yes... and could be not at times...as we see from this write...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid (11/17/2008 7:34:00 AM)

    How strong a love can be, how weak a love can be! A soulful separation depicted in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 329 Points Marilyn Lott (11/16/2008 11:18:00 AM)

    Relationships can be so difficult and sometimes we must say goodbye. It is seldom easy and our lives have been touched by this person from the past. But sometimes it's the only way. I enjoyed your poem, Palas, good job! A '10! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (11/16/2008 9:28:00 AM)

    letting go, saying it didn't work out, wasn't meant to be- is hard. yes, evey one is allowed to follow their dreams. even if you try to be brave, you suffer for some time. poignant write palas.10

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  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/16/2008 2:08:00 AM)

    Love makes you libral but binds together as well. One should not have a feeling of possessiveness to whome he or she loves. Just let it be......., (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (11/15/2008 5:43:00 PM)

    Good-byes are always sad. I hope that this one was not forever.
    Very poignant.10 for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Trinity K (11/9/2008 6:05:00 PM)

    never let go.. never hold...
    just let it be...thats love.........! ! !

    its so nice to read your poetry...! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Who Iam (11/8/2008 10:22:00 AM)

    The test of true love sometimes needs revisited to assure eac other it is meant to be.
    Well done, another ten from me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (11/8/2008 5:10:00 AM)

    Palas, we all come to this ultimate point stay or go, heart or no.. great poetry you know.. Andrew 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 7, 2014


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