Life Poem by Shelby Kaitlin Taylor

Life

Rating: 2.6


Life is like a balloon
You never know when its going to pop
It could pop any time
You think to yourself
What will happen to my family
How bad will they be hurt
Death is unexspected

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 12 July 2010

I like this poem and have given it a rating. I also have a poem titled life. If you would like to look at it please do, maybe it could serve to give you some ideas.God bless Juan.

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Lynn Glover 28 June 2010

Your poem rings the truth, but I would suggest you might want to write about something other than death. You are to young to dwell on this subject. Your friend, Lynn.

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Jessica Jenner-ives 04 February 2010

That is such a true poem (: xx

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Tiffanie Drayton 04 February 2010

unexpected? Cute poem otherwise.

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