Life Poem by Francesca Kliewer

Life

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Life is like a roller coaster
it has many ups and downs.
Some people say live in the moment
but what of the consequences?
Yet there are those who try to
plan every moment.
At times we must let God
take control of our lives.

Friday, June 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 03 October 2015

Nicely written, Francesca. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 October 2015

At times we must let God take control of our lives. letting God to take control of your life is the best way to be successful and joyful. God bless you a very nice poem thank you

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Colleen Courtney 08 June 2014

Hmmm...although I do like the poem and the whole idea of the poem, I tend to feel that letting God control our lives equates with Living In The Moment. Glad I read this for it gives me something to ponder on!

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