Pijush Biswas

Gold Star - 11,323 Points (12 July,1988 / Srirampur, Nadia, West Bengal, India)

Life - Poem by Pijush Biswas

Life is like frozen ice
Its body is hard and chill
Life looks priceful and nice
When all demands come out to fulfil
Just as water get solid shape
When coolness comes to tip.

Life is like a fragrant rose
Its aroma spreads all around
When gets it nourishing dose
Just as rose needs love unbound,
To keep its beauty on
From dawn to dusk, on and on..

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Life by Pijush Biswas

  • Anita Khelawan Anita Khelawan (3/18/2016 10:28:00 AM)

    your poem was a good read... thanx for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Randhir Kaur Randhir Kaur (3/8/2016 1:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful write...Life is like frozen ice...nice. (Report) Reply

  • Sk Nurul Huda Sk Nurul Huda (2/29/2016 7:43:00 AM)

    beautiful....life is simply great like your metaphoric poem....nice thanks... (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/8/2016 11:15:00 PM)

    Biswas This poem is a creative and compelling composition about life. Keep on keeping on! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (12/7/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    a beautiful write. soulful expression. loved your ink (Report) Reply

  • Lucifera Santez Lucifera Santez (11/26/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    To keep its beauty on
    From dawn to dusk, on and on..
    nice one.
    loved it.
    please read some of my work and comment.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    A beautifully life about this poem comparing life and the rose. Just like
    the rose life has to be watered and nourished. Without these two basics
    there wouldn't be any. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Kanniappan Kanniappan Kanniappan Kanniappan (11/24/2013 9:53:00 PM)

    Dear Pijush,
    I read your poem on 'Life'. Excellent, well formed. I like it. I shall read all other poems also. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (11/24/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    a successful poem, keep practising, you are good at writing poetry... (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/24/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem life needs apart from food, water and roof to stay love love is the universal in nature lovely thank Pijush 10 (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (11/24/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    To keep its beauty on
    From dawn to dusk, on and on.. - - - - - - - - very nice expression. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (11/24/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    To keep its beauty on
    From dawn to dusk, on and on.. - - - - - - - - very nice expression. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 7, 2016


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