Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,127 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Life - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Candles in the window
waiting for life to come home
the flame forever burning
like it's losing it's soul

Life is for living
not for burning alone
live every part of it
don't lose your way home

Comments about Life by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 97,368 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    Life is for living
    not for burning alone.. beautiful depiction...10

    life is for living
    and truly believing
    about struggle
    and how to come off trouble (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,675 Points Hazel Durham (2/26/2014 3:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful write with good advice to grasp life, there is no need to be alone, if we reach out to people! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,727 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/6/2014 8:04:00 PM)

    live every part of it
    don't lose your way home

    well said, Dave..I have admired the English people obsession with the candles...Thank you.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,605 Points * Sunprincess * (2/5/2014 5:20:00 PM)

    ........life is for living...a beautiful write... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,414 Points Smoky Hoss (2/5/2014 3:50:00 PM)

    Now that is good advice, and wonderful wisdom. Great! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,588 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/5/2014 1:45:00 PM)

    Life is for living. Make it worthwhile. Beautiful message. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 518 Points Joseph Anderson (2/5/2014 1:03:00 PM)

    Good things come in small packages and this is proof. Brief and brilliant-a 10 for this (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/3/2014 10:07:00 AM)

    A Wonderful poem with a Great message...
    Flame of life will keep on burning till it doesn't extinguishes,
    Unfortunately many are burning alone.
    Very true said...Life is for living every part of it, by not loosing its way home. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (2/2/2014 4:44:00 PM)

    Life is for living, and preferably not alone. Sadly, many people are, and this is something society needs to address. Very good write Dave, well expressed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 3, 2014

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