Life Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Life

Rating: 5.0


Candles in the window
waiting for life to come home
the flame forever burning
like it's losing it's soul

Life is for living
not for burning alone
live every part of it
don't lose your way home

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 03 February 2014

A Wonderful poem with a Great message... Flame of life will keep on burning till it doesn't extinguishes, Unfortunately many are burning alone. Very true said...Life is for living every part of it, by not loosing its way home. Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 February 2014

Life is for living. Make it worthwhile. Beautiful message. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 02 February 2014

Life is for living, and preferably not alone. Sadly, many people are, and this is something society needs to address. Very good write Dave, well expressed.

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Joseph Anderson 05 February 2014

Good things come in small packages and this is proof. Brief and brilliant-a 10 for this

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

Candles in the window waiting for life to come home the flame forever burning like it's losing it's soul.....a great message in metaphorical poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2014

Life is for living not for burning alone.. beautiful depiction...10 life is for living and truly believing about struggle and how to come off trouble

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Hazel Durham 26 February 2014

Beautiful write with good advice to grasp life, there is no need to be alone, if we reach out to people!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 February 2014

live every part of it don't lose your way home well said, Dave..I have admired the English people obsession with the candles...Thank you..

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Smoky Hoss 05 February 2014

Now that is good advice, and wonderful wisdom. Great!

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