Life... Poem by kaki lutta

Life...

Rating: 4.5


With life comes challenges, Abruptly they hit us below the belt, Tears are left on our faces, Piercing pain is felt! ! We fall into an abyss of misery, 'why me..why' we ask ourselves, We send our problems to calvary, Our hearts pierced by a thousand knives! ! Friends who we should run to, Ironically run away from us, Our families of one or two, Turn their backs on us..

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 02 November 2015

Life is this way. A powerful piece, Kaki. Thanks

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Kaki Lutta 12 November 2015

thank you Kelly Kurt

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2015

a lot of pain in your write, Kaki.. and understand that the format went lost when you posted it.. am I right? Is it something like this? __________________ With life comes challenges Abruptly they hit us below the belt Tears are left on our faces, Piercing pain is felt We fall into an abyss of misery 'why me..why' we ask ourselves. We send our problems to calvary, Our hearts pierced by a thousand knives. Friends whoM we should run to Ironically run away from us. [Even] Our families of one or two Turn their backs on us.. ______________________ - - pardon me if this was not the format you wanted.. - - Cheers

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Kaki Lutta 12 November 2015

you are right Fabrizio Frosini

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Gajanan Mishra 02 November 2015

beautiful, piercing pain..

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