into the dark cold water
i cant see whats in front of me
i cant hear whats near to come
my fingers are cold
toes are tingling
awaiting the next feeling
under and under i go
panic starts to set in
relax and it will be the end
arms start to twitter
legs start to float
my head is thinking wish i could
have had the pleasure of a boat
up and up i go
realizing the day is near
i have just went through life
and i have no fear
Really beautiful well coined lines....... the potential is more to see u a great poet.......hope I am reading a good poet........please share with me whenever time permits.......
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I would like to translate this poem
I enjoyed this piece alot, your lines filled with depth that drags the reader into this wonderful piece on finely penned expression A joyful 10