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Obed Souza (8/2/2009 12:22:00 PM)
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Life... the air the dead breathe.... wonderful! 10
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/19/2009 10:35:00 PM)
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one of the best thoughts i come across. each para is a gem 10. shan
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rago rago (6/18/2009 8:27:00 PM)
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a truth in simple words.............
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Pandian Angelina (6/15/2009 3:53:00 PM)
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Food for thought:
To which pastures
Does Ashraful turn upon
To feed his thoughts!
Lovely & deeply significant poem,
Whose thoughts
Are inversly propotionate
To its size!
Angel
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (6/6/2009 7:06:00 PM)
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it is lifeless but stone survive the ages n no life.. vivid but short description... appriciate it most....10
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Vanita Thakkar (6/4/2009 7:37:00 AM)
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Reminds me of Nissim Ezekiel's 'Beauty'.
In your bones the marrow may stir as you see realities of Life.... or when you read Ashraful Musaddeq's 'Life'. But, that it how it is.
The concluding lines are really good.
Great poem.
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Brishti Mazumdar (6/3/2009 10:05:00 AM)
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Life is glittering rain particle
Gradually driven
At last into soil // Life is dead shell
Rotten and spreading bad smell
Who will take that?
varried thoughts....although to me it seemed a bit contradictory....Liked yet, as I am your fan...Brishti Mazumdar
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Anthony Han (6/3/2009 3:59:00 AM)
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I like your poem about life as well, the rhyming is pretty nice
and thanks for readin mine: P
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Shashendra Amalshan (5/30/2009 7:46:00 AM)
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'Flickering lantern of winter night
Put out in the dark
Even then remorse wakes up! '
I like your expressions..nice and up to the point..thought provoking indeed 10
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