Life At Times Poem by anncelin dev

Life At Times



life at times do suck!
like beggers who beg for bucks

life at times do kill!
'coz it lacks emotion pills

life at times do bleed!
inspite of graceful deeds

life at times do speak!
of things that wet the cheeks

lif at times go mad!
that it swings our mind so bad

life at times go rude!
that it do spoil ones mood

life at times do scream!
of things that it dont dare to speak in dreams

Ugh! ! Ugh! ! life oh life!
i stand you not anymore!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 26 July 2012

'tis a very beautiful poem////// well-written in a good and ordered manner! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! top marks//////////////

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Anncelin Dev 03 November 2011

thnx a lot joshua :) .........n yea we do gotta make the best f it: P

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Joshua Hillard 02 November 2011

This is a very beautiful poem, it was clearly written, it was deep and emotional, yet it was fun to read, so I give you a 10+++++++++ because it was amazing! ! Great job, you think like I do: P SO don't give up, ffff life, but we gotta make the best of it right? ? ! : p

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Anncelin Dev 31 October 2011

haha...yes......my life is awesome with you ;)

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Mercy Vin 30 October 2011

gud job frnd...bt y'knw....lyf's nt so bad wen u hav frnds lyk me...: P.. right? ? ? ? ?

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