Life Is Beautiful Poem by Kylee Bartz

Life Is Beautiful

Rating: 4.5


Butterflies of red and blue
flutter through the air
They dance among the flowers
Leaving footprints everywhere

Life is beautiful.

Daffodils and tulips grow
They are sprouting all around
Red and yellow flowers start
Within the futile ground

Life is beautiful.

Tropical fish swim
the Orca whale will dive
Polyps flourish among its floor;
The ocean is alive

Life is beautiful.

Children playing in the yard
Screaming and laughing fills my ears
Children poor some 'tea' and laugh
Laugh as they say 'cheers! ''

Life is beautiful.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 24 May 2010

bitterness spills from the beggar kids wills hungry prey ravages upon the helpless kid life is beautiful............... policemen dance upon the street dwellers lawn seeding weeds of brutes feeding upon the freely available mutes yet, life is beautiful...... blinds multiply blinded dry when winter freezes in and loved ones figures out still life is beautiful....... when the fallen leaves cry when the barren walls moan when the poor sell their honour' and plundered are their hours when the world around is starved of justice to many and when few rejoice with honey still do you feel life is beautiful, my dear? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Love this poem as Life is beautiful but how you describe it...it's heavenly great poem

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Afzal Shauq 19 July 2010

life is really sweet.. you are right.. the poem is really well and professionally written..liked it very much...great 10/10

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Rudy We 25 May 2010

dear. you have presented a positve view of life and it is very pleasant. laitha iyer commented on ur poem by writing the sad side of life both of you compliment eachother. sadness and beauty.. pain and joy freedom and slavery. richness and poverty. thank both of you in presenting ur ideas. God bless you

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KYLEE BARTZ 25 May 2010

I still believe that life is beautiful. you have to focus on the positives and not live your life in the negatives. It is true that crap happens, but its going to happen no matter what. I try to help as many people as I can, but one person can't change the world. I can see where you come from, and I pray that you will be able to see the beauty in the world too.

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Anonymous Butterfly 24 May 2010

I like the fourth stanza: Children playing in the yard Screaming and laughing fills my ears Children poor some 'tea' and laugh Laugh as they say 'cheers! ' I like the way you see life. Filled with laughter and with beauty of nature. Even though life is rough these days. Smiley, smiley, smiley. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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