Life Is Like A Pencil Poem by demi buxton

Life Is Like A Pencil



people say life
is like a pencil
every time it breaks
or goes blunt
you have to sharpen
it agian and agian and agian

in life every time
you come to an end
or your heart gets broken
you have to start
agian and agian and agian
to reboost your self
in every way

some times it works
or sometimes
the led snaps in side the shell
and it just doesnt work! !

by demi buxton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 May 2009

A brand new fresh image of life. It is also important what you write with this pencil. Beautiful poem, Demi. Keep writing..........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sidi Mahtrow 30 April 2009

Good thing about most pencils is that They have an eraser to take back Thoughts that were put to paper And one wishes to change later. But life's not a line in sand That can be erased by tide or man But is recorded as in stone To be reviewed when you're alone And in the end, best of all When your friends say, 'You stood Tall.' s

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Joseph Poewhit 28 April 2009

Interesting analogy of life - the point

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