Life Less Of Hope Poem by charles stephen

Life Less Of Hope



Life seems to lose taste
I can't predict my own destined fate
I wanna take a thousand steps
Away from this pain and tears
Each dawn brings more agony
Am trying to avoid this melancholy, this felony
This addiction in which i find solace
Life then seems great, but only for a few seconds, minutes;
Huh! Not even hours? ?
Am sorry mum, am not the kind of son you ever wanted
Nothing I do works, it sucks
My plans to put up a smile on your face always futile
I don't know what wrong I ever did
But to who? Whom did I wrong?
This mystery is always tearing me up
Taking up the last bit of my breath
I feel so impotent;
Sometimes I feel I wanna give up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 03 December 2013

I wish you lots of strength, man.

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Hans Vr 03 December 2013

I think I can understand, Charles. Sometimes it can get really very dark in our lives. Sometimes the light of a single firefly is all the light we can see. But let us grasp this small, small light as a proof of the light being alive and a wonderful sunrise may be just around the corner. Sometimes I am locked in a valley of misery but the path out of the valley has been always one of love, unconditional love. If we really manage to give love unconditionally, our life can change dramatically. Problems do not go away, but suddenly we see them from a different angle. Your poem provokes quite something in me. I got really touched by it. I am just writing my thoughts as they appear. Excellent and thought provoking poem

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Babatunde Aremu 14 November 2013

Don't give up. The mere realisation of the confrontations is a sign of solution at sight. You can be what you're determined to become. There is much in you to be offered, no room for pessimism

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